If only I had had
A few better words to spell
To open up my heart
to show you the feel
reach you, touch you
I’d say, you’d feel
If I had, a few better words to spell
Closer than when we touch
more real than what you see
deeper than what I say I feel
It could make everything be
If only I could pick,
A few better words to speak
Sinking in, living within
every phrase from me
They’d keep us together
tied in strings unseen
A few better words, if I could read
Bring hope & love
tears of joy
warmth & peace
assuring I’m there
A few better words, if I had to make you believe
Get a smile to your lips
meet your eyes with my stare
Making the moment alive
break out of those ties
of distance and spaces.
Leaving just you and me
And a few better words, if only I could keep.
October 26, 2009 at 7:44 am |
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October 26, 2009 at 4:37 pm |
you know wot, nobody could complete this poem better than you. Am not exaggeratin anything, but this sentence, ‘I’d say, you’d feel
If I had, a few better words to spell’,
its damn good re… plus the poem anyways is almost done, u just need to add two more stanzas, may be expressin the same feelings..
ps: We’ll be waitin to see this poem complete into a beauty..
October 27, 2009 at 4:44 am |
tnx zubair… ya even i wanted to add the feeln stanza..but jus didn..:)will try